The Echo

December 4, 2009
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“I’m sorry” he whispered
A cold harsh whisper
I’m sorry” he whispered
As the gun went off

The explosion was quiet
The bang was guiltless

“I’m sorry” the smoke whispered
A cold harsh whisper

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HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:21 am
It's short, but tells a good story. I like it.
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