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“I’m sorry” he whispered
A cold harsh whisper
I’m sorry” he whispered
As the gun went off

The explosion was quiet
The bang was guiltless

“I’m sorry” the smoke whispered
A cold harsh whisper



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HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:21 am:
It's short, but tells a good story. I like it.
 
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