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Yours

Like my heart
it is hard and cold,
beautiful,
it throws
rainbows in the light,
it stands still, as
my heart it is
also yours.



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deathonapedestal101 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 8:13 pm:
i love it, its short, its simple, but it says so much!
 
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 8:24 pm :
This aint no lie!!! wonderful!
 
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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:52 pm:
Haha I agree with roseann. Cool beans, man! Serioulsy wicked emotion I always like poems that are short and sweet but still get the point across very effectively. I like it! :)
 
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roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 7:20 am:
cool beans!
 
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carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 8:59 pm:
at first, it sounds simple...
then when you think about it, it is the exact opposite. Everything one may be feeling is put into this complex little poem.
I love the way you write!
great job!
 
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Eniliuqcaj said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 3:25 pm:
its sweet and i like it
 
Eniliuqcaj replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 3:25 pm :
check some of my stuff out too i think you would enjoy it
 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 6:33 pm:
This is simple, but still nice. I like it.
 
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DirtyIceCream.xo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 3:05 pm:
This piece is abundant with beauty and vibrance. :)
 
playmate replied...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 2:42 pm :
that is so beautiful keep it up.!!!!
 
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