Yours

December 4, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


Like my heart
it is hard and cold,
beautiful,
it throws
rainbows in the light,
it stands still, as
my heart it is
also yours.



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on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:24 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This aint no lie!!! wonderful!

on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:13 pm
deathonapedestal101 GOLD, Owego, New York
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If thou lovest me then,
Steal forth thy father's house tomorrow night;
And in the wood, a league without the town,
Where I did meet thee once with Helena,
To do observance to a morn of May,
There will I stay for thee.

i love it, its short, its simple, but it says so much!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:52 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Haha I agree with roseann. Cool beans, man! Serioulsy wicked emotion I always like poems that are short and sweet but still get the point across very effectively. I like it! :)

on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:20 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

cool beans!

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on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:42 pm
playmate GOLD, Violethill, Arkansas
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P.O.K

that is so beautiful keep it up.!!!!

on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:59 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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at first, it sounds simple...

then when you think about it, it is the exact opposite. Everything one may be feeling is put into this complex little poem.

I love the way you write!

great job!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 3:25 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
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this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

check some of my stuff out too i think you would enjoy it

JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 3:25 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

its sweet and i like it

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:33 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is simple, but still nice. I like it.

Molls.xo GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 3:05 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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This piece is abundant with beauty and vibrance. :)


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