December 9, 2009
I take steps back
time stops what do you think of that
you stand right and front of me
its not you moving
its only me
me staring at you
but you cannot tell
you dont blink nothing at all
so you wont ever know how your voice runs through my mind
and i think of you all the time
but there is silence
nothing around i grab your hand and smile
hoping it will stay like this for awhile
but i wake up
i day dream its true and i always think of you
just you
if there was only silence

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^unshed.tears said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 11:17 am
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Jose4Jesus said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 7:00 am
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kysh15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 10:15 pm
this is really good!
Whisperer said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:48 pm
this is really good. i can kind of relate to this. thank you :)
Ale_18 said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 2:24 pm
i liked it:) u did a good job
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