Take my wish.

December 3, 2009
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Put my wish in your pocket,
And then take it out.
A key is what you see.
Now unlock my heart
And fix it.
Because I don’t want it
To bleed.





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MidnightAngel7 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 8:58 pm
You said so much by saying so little. It was perfect!
 
*JustDance* said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 5:11 pm
This is so simple, and yet it doesn't need to be any longer. This gets right to the heart of it. truly beautiful
 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Thankyew. :D
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2010 at 8:31 pm
very very nice-your work is filled with emotion...would you please read the works of insaneprincess-she could use the feedback and I'm sure you'd enjoy it....
 
~*)Wish(*~ replied...
May 9, 2010 at 11:08 am
yeah sure :) and thanks for YOUR feedback :)
 
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