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Remember the day
When you took my hand
Held it with yours
The first time I realized I really liked you
You walked me home
Never letting go of me
You looked me in my eyes
Kissed me
For the first time
As I walked away I was smiling
Were you smiling too?
Do you remember that?
Do you remember the day when I was sick?
And you said you didn’t care
As I walked painfully outside
You smile at me
Tell me I look beautiful anyways
You laugh at my sick voice
Held my hand
Once again
You said I don’t care if I get sick
And you kissed me
When I walked away smiling
I for the first time realized I loved you
Did you love me too?
I loved that day
But do you ever remember it?
Or how about the day when you pulled my heart
Called me to tell me to come over
I was so excited to see you
But if only I knew that you were telling me good bye
I tried not to cry
I really did
Were you smiling?
While I was shedding tears
You ripped my heart in two
Do you remember that day?
When I got home
I see the ugly necklace
You bought me
I held it
Closed my eyes
Pulled softly
Pulled harder
A little harder
The necklace broke
Beads flew everywhere
Where were you?
Why aren’t you here?
You can’t do this is all I said
What did I do wrong?
Nothing
I scrounge up the pieces and put them in a bag
A bag full of love
Hate
Disaster
As I call your phone
Excited to yell
You answer
Here they come
You try and hold them back
Tears
You can’t stop
He says hunny its okay
But it’s really not
You then be immature and
Say I love you and hang up
I bet you don’t remember that day either
Do you remember me?
The girl who loved you
No wait
The girl
Who still loves you?
Is it wrong that I can’t let you go?
Because I still want you
And it’s three months later
The bag full of beads
Lies on my dresser
Worn out from
Me holding it
And crying
All I’m trying to ask is
Do you remember me, like I remember you?





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JeannineB said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 5:30 pm
this one and the only one are tied for me..i cant decide which one i like more.
but i do know that i LOVE you and i am very very proud of you MY DEARY
 
taylorl1 said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 3:18 pm
thank youu!
 
Trilby B. said...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 12:27 pm
Ohhhhh My Grrr this is Brillian,amazing,Great!!! i love this,i understand it,alot its perfrect,keep writing
 
Lovebug07 said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 10:41 pm
This is so deep and heart felt, Its amazing!!!
 
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