November 30, 2009
By , diamond back, CA
I stare
blank space
on my bed
i think
i look in the mirror
dispise what i come to see
i shouted
"i love you mom"
no reply
i picked it up
cocked it back
and pulled the trigger
before my last breath
escaped my lips
i was hit
with regret
and wispered
"im sorry"

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Lovebug07 said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 10:31 pm
For this just being something it is really good, this is amazing!!!
SilentDeath134 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 8:54 pm

yeah i aree as well i really liked it

keep writting that was great

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