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Red beads
Gold masks
Yellow balloons
Purple feather boas
Orange sparkles
Green glass shards
Black alleys
Maroon blood
Purple bruises
Blue police lights
Silver handcuffs
Tan back seats
White jail cell
Rainbow of Mardi Gras



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Sarah.Q, This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 12:47 am:
Thank you all so much!
 
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Kay4theRoses said...
Dec. 25, 2009 at 7:28 pm:
briana m. is right. i loved how you did'nt have to use sentences to get your point across. it sounds like this happened, because of the way the mood changed. in most poetry the feeling stays the same, but in real life, everything is always changing- just like your poem. excellent job.
 
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mellow_melon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 9:07 am:
i like the mood of it, i loved how you changed the meaning of it so fast. but i dont know....there's something missing i think....it seems like there needs to be a different ending. but what do i know? lol
 
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LivingInABasket said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 3:38 am:
WOW! COlOURS!!! anyway...good poem. The way you made it more sinister towards the end was great.
 
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Briana M. said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 12:04 pm:
Wow, it was amazing how the mood tranformed, and in so few words.
 
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