O' Child

November 22, 2009
By twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
14 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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none :P


hold your tears my pretty one
dry your eyes little young one
stop your quivering jaw
love has left,
it had beten and abused you,
but it has gone

hush dear, you are safe,
pick up the peices of your heart
and cradle them close,
poor thing, these tears wont help,
love wont hurt you any more

O' child, be wary,
your egerness to forget may cloud your jugment
we both know these fears well,
afraid of pain,
of shame,
afraid to to bare the peiced together remains that is your heart

peace child do not fear,
love will be wary if you are too



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twiwrite GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 8:01 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
14 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
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thank you all. i appreciate your opinions!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 2:58 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

I agree with Fayrouz, the O' Child was a great touch to this poem. I love this, please continue to write more!

on Feb. 9 2010 at 8:14 pm
have_a_heart GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
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Parting is all we know of heaven and all we need of hell.

this one was sooo amazing! my favorite that i have read by you so far! i loved the emotions and the rhythm was on check the entire time!

twiwrite GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 7:30 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
14 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
none :P

thank you!

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 6:20 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

this was very heart touching! I imagined a little girl with broken glass in her bleeding hand....the O'child gives it a classy, motherly kind of feel that's almost safe and comforting. love it :)


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