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how you make me feel when i look into you

December 5, 2009
By expressiveme BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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expressiveme BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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"love is only defined by a single feeling that we as humans believe in" - expressiveme

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when i look into you i see the pain
when i look into you i see the poisen
when i look into you i see your story
when i look into you i want to cry when i look into you i want to die
when i look into you i see your soul
when i look into you its never morning
when i look into you i turn away in hopes of never finding myself...so im never in a hurry
so i look at you to find my soul
i look at you straight eyed and bold
i look at you never to be judgemental
i look at you only to find courage
i look at you to find my story

© Hilary L., Rogers City, MI

The author's comments:
in reading some of my latest work in my journals, i felt that i write about what i see in other people and its always the same type of happy feeling scene....so this time i wanted to show some of the dark things that i see and hear about.
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