Surrender

November 16, 2009
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I freeze
In the place
Of his
Cold
Blue
Eyes.
Shooting pain
Through my
Heart.
Agony twisting
In my
Nerves.
As he watches me,
My heart slowly
Breaks.





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MidnightAngel7 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 9:02 pm
I think that tis can be interpreted in differnt ways. I love the way it makes the reader think.
 
LoveLikeWoe replied...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 8:29 pm
(: thank you.
 
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