Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > The River The River By Kayla A., West Jordan, UT More by this author gently brushes the rocks that lie below. This is bait that gently wakes in the water while it flows. « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse (=amanda=) said... Dec. 11, 2009 at 3:00 pm: i like this =) maybe you could do a few more stanzas? idk..but all in all, great poem =) Report abuse Powd3er said... Dec. 9, 2009 at 2:59 pm: This poem has great flow and insight. I really enjoyed it. Lovely poem darling =] -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz- XxDear Mr. President Let Meh Tell You 'Bout Hard Work Building A Bed Out Of A Cardbord BoxXx crymyheart replied... Dec. 11, 2009 at 5:25 pm : Nice one! Short and sweet.