The River

November 23, 2009
By Kayla Allred GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
Kayla Allred GOLD, West Jordan, Utah
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The river rushes as it
gently brushes the
rocks that lie below.
This is bait that
gently wakes in the
water while it flows.


The author's comments:
Writting with my aunt.

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on Dec. 11 2009 at 5:25 pm
cry.my.heart BRONZE, Murray, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The closer we are to danger the farther we are from harm"
-Pippen, The Lord of the Rings

Nice one! Short and sweet.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 3:00 pm
(=amanda=) GOLD, Somerset, Ohio
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i like this =) maybe you could do a few more stanzas? idk..but all in all, great poem =)

on Dec. 9 2009 at 2:59 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

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