The River

November 23, 2009
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The river rushes as it
gently brushes the
rocks that lie below.
This is bait that
gently wakes in the
water while it flows.

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(=amanda=) said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 3:00 pm
i like this =) maybe you could do a few more stanzas? idk..but all in all, great poem =)
Powd3er said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 2:59 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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crymyheart replied...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 5:25 pm
Nice one! Short and sweet.
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