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What happens
When your heart
Has no more love
Left to give,
When your soul
Is aching
too bad to live?
What happens
When your pain
Is the only thing
That stays,
When your dreams
Are the hope
That drifts away?



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windswift This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 9:04 pm:
what happens is that you begin to lose sight of who you are, and you mold around others, no longer wanting to be yourself, or go against the flow of things, do not let this become you, you can win the fight against the pain, its a long battle, but it can be done, trust me, ive gone down the same path that you seem to be heading down, and its not worth it, all at, it only holds you back, keep fighting, dont give up, life will get better, make it better.
 
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AVERAGE said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 2:04 pm:
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 2:12 pm:
amazing - its so true .
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:31 am :
(:(:thanx;);)
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:16 am:
Fantastic - it's so sweet :)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:13 pm :
Thank you...I appreciate the comment
 
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