Invisible

November 10, 2009
By katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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You can’t see me anymore, I’m invisible to you.
Nothing will be the same.
Your eyes are clouded by the opinions of others.
Those same eyes I would turn to.
Those same eyes that welled up with tears at my troubles.
Those same eyes are gone.



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on Dec. 15 2009 at 6:13 am
katie123 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 22 photos 13 comments
hey thanks for the comment that really made my day and i read some of your stuff and your a really good writer too.

on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:42 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

short adn sweet and too the point. you made your point completely w/o cutting it off or cluttering it with unneeded words, and that is an art.


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