November 10, 2009
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You can’t see me anymore, I’m invisible to you.
Nothing will be the same.
Your eyes are clouded by the opinions of others.
Those same eyes I would turn to.
Those same eyes that welled up with tears at my troubles.
Those same eyes are gone.

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writerscramp said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 1:42 pm
short adn sweet and too the point. you made your point completely w/o cutting it off or cluttering it with unneeded words, and that is an art.
katie123 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 6:13 am
hey thanks for the comment that really made my day and i read some of your stuff and your a really good writer too.
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