Blissful Goodbye

November 9, 2009
By Emily Entwistle BRONZE, Holmdel, New Jersey
Emily Entwistle BRONZE, Holmdel, New Jersey
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The sun's rays blind you, as you sit and stare
No one there beside you, just the winded air
Sitting in the grass, the squirrels your company
Here come the birds, retiring in the tree
The crickets chirping, saying hello
Clouds looking down at the trees below
As wind comes the leaves shiver in fear
For they know what's to happen in end of their year
Watching fall's bliss you can't help but sigh
Seeing everything's last goodbye
For the beautiful forest and all its glory
Spring awaits to continue the story



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Karen D said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 11:00 am
Emily, Awesome job! We have a writer on our team!

shelleychina said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 9:19 am
Beautifully written! Excellent work!!

A Sav said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 9:20 pm
Emily, Great Work!!!

uncle ken said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 7:46 am
a wonderful poem that everyone will love !

Nicolle M. said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 8:27 pm
Great poem Em! I loved it!

Viki M. said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 7:34 pm
What a beautiful poem Emily!!! Loved it!!

busymom said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 7:56 am
Beautiful poem; I could feel the season changing in front of me!!!

"HC"

Nana1 said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:16 pm
What a lovely poem Emily! You did a great job.

lotus56 said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 8:34 pm
Very touching poem Emily, very nice

Pappy1 said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:27 pm
This is a beautitful outstanding poem

Reyn said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 5:24 pm
This is great, Em! I didn't know you wrote poetry!

Cheermom said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 11:18 am
What a beautiful poem!


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