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The Dark

November 5, 2009
By Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
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Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
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I can't work with these people. I'm going to my locker room!

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Dark
Oh so

So very dark
Piercing

Blackness
Intangible

Sight
Lost
No feeling

Oh where, where?

Confusion

Turmoil
Lost

So very lost
Where, where?

Nothing
Cold

So cold

Shivers and

Trembles


Crying


Weeping
Cold and fear and blackness
All slowly melt away

To nothingness

The author's comments:
I wrote this during a depressing time in my life, when I was falling back into some old habits.
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Vilhelm GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 2:52 pm
Vilhelm GOLD, Elk River, Minnesota
19 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't work with these people. I'm going to my locker room!

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This was like 8 months ago Pyro. I'm good now. I have you and my other friends. :D
pyropoet DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 1:16 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
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You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.
-L. Kimpton

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OMG! don't be depressed! that's my job! i can't believe that you were this depressed :'( it's really sad.