i understand

November 17, 2009
By jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS!!!!! <3


i understand
that ive wasted your time
i understand
that you dont want me
i understand
that what i thought will never be
i understand
that we could but you wont
i understand
that ive tried too hard
i understand
and thats why i have to stop
i understand
that im not what you want
i understand
so thats why im leaving
i understand
and thats why you wont hear from me again
i understand
thats why this is gooodbye
i understand
i love you but you dont love me
i understand
so this is my last goodbye
im sorry i wasted your time
youll soon forget me
adios para siembre mi amor


The author's comments:
well i was talkin to this guy but he just wasnt that into me so i wrote this poem
hope yall like : ) comment good or bad : )

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thebest BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:54 pm
thebest BRONZE, Egg Harbor Township, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
indifference to evil is evil-Elie Wiesel

This one has a nice flow. its very deep and understanding i love it.

Grace09 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 10:02 pm
Grace09 BRONZE, Colorado City, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"You have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg." By: I can't remember.

Nice work!

on Nov. 24 2009 at 4:44 pm
BaBii_GhErL PLATINUM, Wasilla, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Loving someone who doesnt love u is not wrong its just painful!

this poems was good i liked it...i used to write poems like this too when a guy would blow me off and things like that...but i dnt anymore...but i still liked it

on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:28 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Dude, i'm totally clicking favorites!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 7:35 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

wow! this is absolutely amazing. your words are very strong. keep it up!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:13 am
Showchoir2012 SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"yes we are our fathers sons and daughters but we are not their choices" -Poetry Slam Knock Knock
"Knock Knock, who's their?, WE ARE!"

omg i love it! great job! it has filled my head with some many ideas, i have been in writers block for too long!

Chryzel BRONZE said...
on Nov. 22 2009 at 8:33 pm
Chryzel BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A life is quick; poison is quicker, and the strongest poison of all is jelousy"

moses tribe

I think that you did a tramendous job with expressing your feelings.

on Nov. 22 2009 at 6:21 pm
jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS!!!!! <3

ohh hmm i didnt think of using that, your right it would have sounded much better. thanks for the feedback : )

on Nov. 22 2009 at 4:52 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is great, I love the spanish at the end! After the third "i understand,', when you say 'that what i thought will never be', maybe you could replace thought with wanted or desired, it would sound better. Otherwise, great poem. Love it!

on Nov. 21 2009 at 11:34 am
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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i love this poem... but i think maybe it needs a few fewer i understand... but then again, thats the entire undertone of the poem, that you understand. dunno. great job :)

on Nov. 21 2009 at 10:39 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

i agree with epcelia. But even if it was wrote in five minutes, THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM. i could feel what you felt just by the strength of your words. Great job! Keep it up!

on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:35 pm
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

this is okay, i can relate to it, but it seems like one of those poems that you write it in 5 minutes but good job(:

on Nov. 20 2009 at 2:57 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

on Nov. 20 2009 at 11:31 am
LavenderStone BRONZE, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"It's never too late—in fiction or in life—to revise." -Nancy Thayer

I really related to this. It's simple, but deep. I like how you kept the lower case theme throughout. and the last line of spanish was a nice touch.

smile:) said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:12 pm
I LIKE IT:)) SOMETIMES I FEEL THE SAME!HIGH FIVE XD !! NICE WORK


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