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i understand
that ive wasted your time
i understand
that you dont want me
i understand
that what i thought will never be
i understand
that we could but you wont
i understand
that ive tried too hard
i understand
and thats why i have to stop
i understand
that im not what you want
i understand
so thats why im leaving
i understand
and thats why you wont hear from me again
i understand
thats why this is gooodbye
i understand
i love you but you dont love me
i understand
so this is my last goodbye
im sorry i wasted your time
youll soon forget me
adios para siembre mi amor



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MR.EHT said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 1:54 pm:
This one has a nice flow. its very deep and understanding i love it.
 
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Grace09 said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 10:02 pm:
Nice work!
 
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BaBii_GhErL said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 4:44 pm:
this poems was good i liked it...i used to write poems like this too when a guy would blow me off and things like that...but i dnt anymore...but i still liked it
 
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~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 9:28 pm:
Dude, i'm totally clicking favorites!
 
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ashbashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 7:35 pm:
wow! this is absolutely amazing. your words are very strong. keep it up!
 
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Showchoir2012 said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 9:13 am:
omg i love it! great job! it has filled my head with some many ideas, i have been in writers block for too long!
 
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Cajunsnow said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 8:33 pm:
I think that you did a tramendous job with expressing your feelings.
 
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Inkspired said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 4:52 pm:
This is great, I love the spanish at the end! After the third "i understand,', when you say 'that what i thought will never be', maybe you could replace thought with wanted or desired, it would sound better. Otherwise, great poem. Love it!
 
jessica<3 replied...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 6:21 pm :
ohh hmm i didnt think of using that, your right it would have sounded much better. thanks for the feedback : )
 
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Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 11:34 am:
i love this poem... but i think maybe it needs a few fewer i understand... but then again, thats the entire undertone of the poem, that you understand. dunno. great job :)
 
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epcelia said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 6:35 pm:
this is okay, i can relate to it, but it seems like one of those poems that you write it in 5 minutes but good job(:
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 10:39 am :
i agree with epcelia. But even if it was wrote in five minutes, THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM. i could feel what you felt just by the strength of your words. Great job! Keep it up!
 
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Powd3er's-Lov3-4-Lif3 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 2:57 pm:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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LavenderStone said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 11:31 am:
I really related to this. It's simple, but deep. I like how you kept the lower case theme throughout. and the last line of spanish was a nice touch.
 
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smile:) said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:12 pm:
I LIKE IT:)) SOMETIMES I FEEL THE SAME!HIGH FIVE XD !! NICE WORK
 
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