I Like The Way You Move

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I love the way you move your lips,
when you talk,
and the way you move your lips,
when you talk,
I love the way you make me feel.
I want to be together forever,
baby I'm for real.

Don't ever fear that what you say may start a fight,
so you stay quiet and seal your lips real tight,
don't say a single word,
fly away with the wind as swift as a bird.

Hope is just a word without certainty,
what lies with all this humanity,
so you have to live your life,
no strings attached,
two wrongs put out of site.





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Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 5:43 pm
Beautiful! But I have to know, was the repetition of the first line intentional? Beautiful job!
-Blessed Be!
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KumaBear replied...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 7:22 pm
No it was an error. The second line was suppose to say "and the way you move you hips when you walk" My mistake. Glad you enjoyed it (:
 
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 2:59 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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heythere said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 6:49 pm
I think that this would be better for song lyrics, the rhyming is good.
 
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