How Can I Be Found If I Was Never Lost?

November 4, 2009
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What do you think,
when you look me in the eyes,
what would you say,
if I were to say good-bye,
how would you feel,
if everything came crashing down,
what would you do,
if I was no where to be found?





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blingblang4eva said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 5:59 pm
very good. i like shortness of it and how every worse has a good deep meanign
 
cyanidecaleph said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 5:26 pm
This poem is so interesting considering you're asking questions about the situation this poem expresses. I love it. I really enjoyed this poem. One of the best I've read today. Keep it up. :)
 
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 3:01 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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