Unconcious

November 2, 2009
By Rayneonme PLATINUM, Newton, North Carolina
Rayneonme PLATINUM, Newton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Others: "I'm sorry. I didn't mean it. I say things I don't mean when I'm angry.". Me: "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said that. I say things I wouldn't normally say when I'm angry. Did I mean it? Heck yeah I meant it! I just wouldn't have said it!"


Darkness closing in
Theres no place to run.
I feel myself sinking.
I reach up to find
Nothing.
Blackness surrounds me
Suffocating me.
Losing breath as I go
Lower and lower.
Finally closing my eyes,
As I take what I think
Is my last breath.
My breathing sky-rockets,
Making it hard to feel
Anything around me.
Everything goes black.


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