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Consequences

Mind screaming, heart racing...wondering what the f**k I'm facing.
Breathing ragged, soul dying...I hear heaven's angels crying.
Watching as the lamb of god, is murdered on the altar...
Awful madness running wild, disemboweling those who falter.
Never have my eyes beheld, nor thought such monstrous evil dwelled...
Upon this mortal plane we share, our blood for gods who never cared.
Adramelech makes his way, into this sacred gathering place...
Accompanied by a shrieking legion, souls who looked upon his face.
I watch a smile cross his features, watch him summon more foul creatures.
From the bowels of hell they issue, to feed upon sweet mortal tissue.
Moist cloying stench of manflesh innards, heaps of midden on the floor...
My nostrils weeping putrid mucous, His summoned creatures howl for more.
I wonder now what fevered thinking, what made me bring this nightmare slinking...
Up from the depths of my despair, to do my bidding here and there?
Lust for power caused these actions, too late now to close the door...
Selfish motive behind my madness, doesn't matter anymore.
Harken all you kindred souls, nursing all your foul ambitions...
Power gained from incantations, carries with it fell conditions!



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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 7:03 pm:
icredibalcable (yes i did that on purpose)captian. this is amazing. you murdered the rhyming scheme. i love it. do your dance.
 
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Musicbox985 said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:32 am:
Thanks for the comment on mine! You're incredible!
 
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Underestimated said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 8:44 pm:
this is incredible! very good job(:
 
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bkcrider92 said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:46 am:
Wow this is amazing! So discriptive! If you could can u check out my poem Memories and comment and rate it? =)
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 1:36 pm:
whoa. incrediblee!!!!
 
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deathonapedestal101 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 8:15 pm:
amazing! mine are usually about hurt, death and distruction, but never this good!
 
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Powd3er said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 11:07 am:
I was really into the omen when I wrote this I guess I was about nine, so I dont exactly remember the mind set I was in when I wrote itt. But it is also one of my favorite works.
 
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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:40 pm:
This is really awesome! I mean th description of all things in this poem are just amazing. You included a lot of fantastic sensory details that just sort of take the reader to the deepest reaches of dante's inferno in a really twisted kind of way. I love it! May I ask how you decided to write this? What sparked your interest?
 
Powd3er replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 11:01 am :
I was really into the omen when I wrote this I guess I was about nine, so I dont exactly remember the mind set I was in when I wrote itt. But it is also one of my favorite works.
 
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 4:16 pm :
It's fantastic! :) I can't believe you wrote this when you were only 9 that's amazing!
 
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roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 7:11 am:
how do you come up with all this? it's absolutly amazing. good thing you commented mine so i could get blown away with this bombing piece of literature!
 
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life-as-we-know-it said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:18 pm:
I really like this poem. It has a nice rhythm and great wordchoice.
 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 6:36 pm:
niCEEEEEEEEEE! it has a good flow and it is....wowwwww. i dont even have words for it. Scary? I love it. Brilliant piece. Very different from all that I have read. My favorite!!
Check me out please. Comment and rate if you wish.
 
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DirtyIceCream.xo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 3:03 pm:
This is dire yet stunning. You are gifted.
 
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SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 4:03 am:
Hey, i love your choice of words. It sounds very interesting and flows well. Great work!
 
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Maigz.xx said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 12:42 am:
:) your very talented :) thanks for ur comments btw!!
 
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