Consequences

October 30, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


Mind screaming, heart racing...wondering what the f**k I'm facing.
Breathing ragged, soul dying...I hear heaven's angels crying.
Watching as the lamb of god, is murdered on the altar...
Awful madness running wild, disemboweling those who falter.
Never have my eyes beheld, nor thought such monstrous evil dwelled...
Upon this mortal plane we share, our blood for gods who never cared.
Adramelech makes his way, into this sacred gathering place...
Accompanied by a shrieking legion, souls who looked upon his face.
I watch a smile cross his features, watch him summon more foul creatures.
From the bowels of hell they issue, to feed upon sweet mortal tissue.
Moist cloying stench of manflesh innards, heaps of midden on the floor...
My nostrils weeping putrid mucous, His summoned creatures howl for more.
I wonder now what fevered thinking, what made me bring this nightmare slinking...
Up from the depths of my despair, to do my bidding here and there?
Lust for power caused these actions, too late now to close the door...
Selfish motive behind my madness, doesn't matter anymore.
Harken all you kindred souls, nursing all your foul ambitions...
Power gained from incantations, carries with it fell conditions!


The author's comments:
Destruction is beautiful

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on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:03 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

icredibalcable (yes i did that on purpose)captian. this is amazing. you murdered the rhyming scheme. i love it. do your dance.

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:32 am
Musicbox985 BRONZE, La Salle, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Never doubt that a small group of people can change the world, indeed; it is the only thing that ever has." --Margaret Mead

Thanks for the comment on mine! You're incredible!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 8:44 pm
Underestimated GOLD, Ocala, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Every girl wants a guy she can go to hair a mess, in sweats, eyes red from crying, and the first thing he says to her is "baby your beautiful" and actually means it.

this is incredible! very good job(:

on May. 20 2010 at 10:46 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Wow this is amazing! So discriptive! If you could can u check out my poem Memories and comment and rate it? =)

on Apr. 17 2010 at 1:36 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

whoa. incrediblee!!!!

on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:15 pm
deathonapedestal101 GOLD, Owego, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If thou lovest me then,
Steal forth thy father's house tomorrow night;
And in the wood, a league without the town,
Where I did meet thee once with Helena,
To do observance to a morn of May,
There will I stay for thee.

amazing! mine are usually about hurt, death and distruction, but never this good!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 4:16 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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It's fantastic! :) I can't believe you wrote this when you were only 9 that's amazing!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 11:01 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I was really into the omen when I wrote this I guess I was about nine, so I dont exactly remember the mind set I was in when I wrote itt. But it is also one of my favorite works.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 11:07 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I was really into the omen when I wrote this I guess I was about nine, so I dont exactly remember the mind set I was in when I wrote itt. But it is also one of my favorite works.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:40 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is really awesome! I mean th description of all things in this poem are just amazing. You included a lot of fantastic sensory details that just sort of take the reader to the deepest reaches of dante's inferno in a really twisted kind of way. I love it! May I ask how you decided to write this? What sparked your interest?

on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:11 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

how do you come up with all this? it's absolutly amazing. good thing you commented mine so i could get blown away with this bombing piece of literature!

on Feb. 9 2010 at 9:18 pm
life-as-we-know-it BRONZE, Tigard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
“But who prays for Satan? Who, in eighteen centuries, has had the common humanity to pray for the one sinner that needed it most?”
~ Mark Twain

I really like this poem. It has a nice rhythm and great wordchoice.

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:36 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

niCEEEEEEEEEE! it has a good flow and it is....wowwwww. i dont even have words for it. Scary? I love it. Brilliant piece. Very different from all that I have read. My favorite!!

Check me out please. Comment and rate if you wish.

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on Jan. 6 2010 at 3:03 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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This is dire yet stunning. You are gifted.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 4:03 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Hey, i love your choice of words. It sounds very interesting and flows well. Great work!

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on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:42 am
mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Just be yourself, because life's to short to be anybody else" :) - Step Up 2 The Streets :) ♥

:) your very talented :) thanks for ur comments btw!!


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