I miss the rain

October 24, 2009
By LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"


Baby, baby, I miss the rain.
Baby, if only you knew how much I hate to cry
Maybe you'd know how hard I do try.
I miss the warmth, I miss the rain, and baby?
Oh baby, I'm sick of these days.
I miss the sunsets and scraped up knees.
I miss the grass stains and bumble bees.
I miss the late nights and the short days.
I miss being barefoot in the sun's rays.
Maybe these things are just small things, baby.
but to me these small things aren't a maybe.
Baby, for sure, these things heighten my joy
The rain, baby, the rain, just like your voice
Softly hitting my face, the rain, baby.
Love, our further gain, baby.
And baby, if only you knew how much I hate to cry
Maybe you'd know how hard I do try.
I miss the warmth, I miss the rain, and baby?
Oh baby, I'm sick of these days.


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on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:30 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

ohhh my lordddd. D: i love this soooo muchhhh!

on Nov. 9 2009 at 5:46 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

I know the word baby was overused. I guess that was part of the meaning. I was pleading to him, just begging him to understand how I felt. But thank you. So much,

on Nov. 9 2009 at 4:24 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is awesome! I love how you rhyme some parts, and repeat some parts. This is really well written, I'd just suggest you don't use "baby" so much? it seems a bit redundant. Otherwise, I love it!

on Nov. 7 2009 at 9:17 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Thank you so much. Your comment gave me a deep smile.

on Nov. 7 2009 at 9:30 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

OHHHHHH MY! I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS PIECE. its deep. you're a talented writer.


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