stop it daddy

i don't see what makes him mad
but all i know is that it makes me sad.

why can't you see what you are doing to me
just leave all that stuff be

o daddy stop it
it can be even bit by bit

one day it will hurt you
and it will hurt me to

daddy please forgive me
it is hard for us to be

daddy i hate this
you know i will miss your kiss





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Hayz~Hardcore said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 11:37 pm
ur poem is soo deep and amazing i love it keep it up ur a great writer and have alot of talent hun...pls check out some of my work and let me know wat u think and also if its not to much to ask rate it too id appriciate it soo much :)
 
dark.death.love replied...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 7:57 am
yea of course i will....and thank you! and also ya i will rate it!
 
lover-of-nothing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 10:10 am
i love this poem it reminds me of me and my step dad
 
dark.death.love replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 2:19 pm
well thanks......
 
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