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In love with the Fantasy
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you

I am often believed to have charm
Yet I feel I will bring harm
It feels very delusional
And the pain is so emotional

In this world I have created
The name of my love has been stated
Her rich happiness and purity
I believe was not tainted by society

Her very life is different from mine
Her personality has given the sign
I know now it cannot be
But I am still in love with the Fantasy.




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JordanNicole said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 3:43 pm:
I love this poem! I think I can relate to this....
 
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AndThisIsReal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 6:27 am:
I liked the title and how its repeated in the last line.
I think this is a beautiful poem. :)
 
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riotgirl1134 said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 7:41 pm:
You have incredible talent. That was absolutely beautiful.
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 5:14 pm:
This is really well written! You combined so many themes to create one so well- everything flows. Great job- I've felt this way so much!
 
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ariwrites94 said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 10:15 am:
wonderful poem! i have surely felt this way before. plz comment and rate my poem "Sensitive Am I." thankx! and once again great job!!!
 
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cassandra_2011 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 10:04 pm:
Hey this is great! I think it would be good to add a few more punctuations like commas, it was hard to follow without them and maybe change it to just "I'm in love with fantasy"? I think people would still understand and it would flow better. It's definitely a great work though. I love the overall story as it created a picture in the reader's head. Great job!
 
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Robsessed said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:37 pm:
"In love with the Fantasy
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you" - that's so beautifully tragic and hopeless yet a relief at knowing the truth. I love how you phrased that verse. It's ironic that on the surface the poem is about Fantasy, but if you peel back the layers it's about Reality. Cool poem.
 
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Jazzzy517 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 12:02 pm:
i kno wat that feels like... except from a girls perspective
 
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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 11:11 am:
I love the emotion and felling that you have added to this peice. writings like this are ones that I can really tell come from personal experiences.
 
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