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Her Maze

October 22, 2009
By Brookeyy BRONZE, Massena, New York
Brookeyy BRONZE, Massena, New York
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Searching.
Endless searching.
She couldn’t figure out
Where he was.

It seemed only moments ago
When she felt
The warmth of his breath,
His hand in hers.

Running around in circles.
She needed to find him.
Trapped in this maze.
Forever.

She could still hear his cheerful laugh,
Increasingly audible with each step.
Excited and relieved,
She runs faster towards the sound.
Heart skipping a beat at the thought.

She turns the corner.
Found him.
Holding another,
Laughing at her flirtations.
She turns around.
She has lost her prince.


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Lostinbooks said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 12:02 am
Lostinbooks, Arcadia, California
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Really? Not bad...I like it.

on Oct. 28 2009 at 8:12 pm
Brookeyy BRONZE, Massena, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This is my first version of "Her Maze" I have another one that has been edited.