October 21, 2009
By Mika_Lestat PLATINUM, Shinnston, West Virginia
Mika_Lestat PLATINUM, Shinnston, West Virginia
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Here I am.....

As you asked me to do,

I scream for help
I scream your name to the sky,

begging for Salvation
But, you turn your back on me

I look at the sky

and it is crying with me
It's tears, as well as mine,

are those of betrayal.

I fall silent and only then

do you reconize me
By now, my soul is choking

with grief.

You ask if I need help.
Laughing with my last breath,

I whisper, "*** you"

and then I die.
But I die with a smile on my face

and I am welcomed to Hell.

The author's comments:
I dont know if you can tell(says I sarcastically) but I was extremely mad when I wrote this. But some of my best writings are written when I am angry, so it's all good.=)

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Avalynn BRONZE said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 8:40 pm
Avalynn BRONZE, Monrovia, California
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Woah, this is a really cool poem! strangely enough, i know exactly how you feel! specially the f u part- nice! but really, i seriously like it! nice job! (can you please check out some of my work? new stuff will be going up in about a week or so... thank you!)


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