Goodbye

October 19, 2009
By sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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I feel as though I will cry
Now on the floor, I stay

Here I am about to die



One tear pushes against my eye


Then a sudden chill of dismay

I feel as though I will cry

All I could ask is why?

Inside me will always decay

Here I am about to die

All happiness is a lie

And there is only night no day

I feel as though I will cry

All hopes soar too high
As my life fades to gray

Here I am about to die

Now I stare at the sky



I know my life will end today
I feel as though I will cry

Here I am about to die


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dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:30 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

that was great!!! i have felt this emotion to a certain degree and i kno it really scares me...it was great tho...i jst hope u dnt go thro this...ur a great person and u deserve a great lyf...look at wht u can write..think of all u have to offer the world and all the world has to offer to u :)

on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:21 pm
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
26 articles 0 photos 21 comments
thank you :)

on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:21 pm
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
26 articles 0 photos 21 comments
thanks. pleas live life happily its too short feel like you will die

on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:20 pm
sadisticpsycho PLATINUM, Congers, New York
26 articles 0 photos 21 comments
thank you. i hope you dont feel this way please be happy with the life you have. its to shourt to feel dead already

goldenlilies said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:10 am
i have felt like this myself. i like the way you described is. you went really deep.

on Oct. 27 2009 at 9:27 am
Sad but beautiful.

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:37 am
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

wow..... that was amazing!!!! really deep, ik exaclty wat that feels lik


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