Home Sweet Home

October 14, 2009
By Just-us BRONZE, Cowpens, South Carolina
Just-us BRONZE, Cowpens, South Carolina
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Home is where my family is.
Where I can go if I need anything.
It’s where my heart can set free when I smell my mom’s home cooking
And hearing the “back in the day stories."
Home is when I can come home and go to my room and play all the music I want and kick my shoes off and start dancing.
Home is where I can cry and laugh when I’m emotional.
Or if I need to laugh at myself sometimes.
It’s where I can talk to my mom and dad about different situations.
Where I feel like I’m on top of the world.
Home to me is a peaceful, heavenly, and spiritual place.

The author's comments:
This piece inspired me to write this because I enjoy being at home and spending it with my family when I can and i love having my quiet space.

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on Oct. 26 2009 at 7:42 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is really beautiful and warm, the writing could use a bit more flow, but otherwise, great job! Exceptional piece!

Sfarias said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 4:55 pm
this is really good

I like it


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