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Seperated
October 18, 2009
The names
The names I've been called
The problems
My problems you can not solve
The pain
My pain you caused me
The hurt
My hurt that wont let me be
The tears
My tears that fall like rain
The marks
My marks from all the pain
The life
My life that seems to be going nowhere
The heart
My heart without a care
The feelings
My feelings that hurt so bad
The mom
My mom I thought I once had
© Lauren O., Weymouth, MA
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This article has 11 comments.
blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:14 pm
love this poem. love the pattern and organization. very creative and well written
Izzy_Nicole GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 5:00 pm
This is beautiful.
jesusfreak.91210 said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 4:28 pm
i enjoyed reading this
stotlers said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:45 am
This piece made me think a little. I enjoyed reading it and by the time I was done I aquirred a hunch of what it was about. Where you write " My marks from all the pain" and "The mom, my mom I thought I once had" really clicked together for me. I thought It sounded like there was a case of child abuse and the young girl was hurting inside. Great work! Keep up the good work!
Just-Maybe GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:52 am
I like this poem. Nice structure and it makes you feel. Awsome job keep it up!
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 1:53 am
i love this! well done, keep it up (:
StandardToaster PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 11:10 pm
nice poem i love it.
Writedancelove&live GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 11:04 pm
I love your structure. This is a very nice piece.
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