Falling

October 17, 2009
By LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"


The apples on a apple tree may change color, they may fall, but my love for you will never change and if you should fall I will always be there to catch you


The author's comments:
I was thinking about nature show its love to things around it and how it relates to how people show there love for things around us

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on Oct. 23 2009 at 2:59 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This was a really good idea, but I think you could improve the wording slightly. Right now it's just a run-on sentence with a spectacular, stunning meaning. Perhaps you could at least make it flow a bit more, if not elaborate?

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

thank you I appreciate it

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

thank you I appreciate it

INnaturegirl said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:55 pm
it was so short but it said everything!!! very beautiful

on Oct. 22 2009 at 6:36 pm
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments
This was short but really good

on Oct. 22 2009 at 2:10 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

please vote for me thank you


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