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The apples on a apple tree may change color, they may fall, but my love for you will never change and if you should fall I will always be there to catch you





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Inkspired said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 2:59 pm
This was a really good idea, but I think you could improve the wording slightly. Right now it's just a run-on sentence with a spectacular, stunning meaning. Perhaps you could at least make it flow a bit more, if not elaborate?
 
INnaturegirl said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:55 pm
it was so short but it said everything!!! very beautiful
 
LadiesMan replied...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 11:10 pm
thank you I appreciate it
 
BrooklynnBlue said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:36 pm
This was short but really good
 
LadiesMan replied...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 11:10 pm
thank you I appreciate it
 
LadiesMan said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 2:10 pm
please vote for me thank you
 
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