Crying

October 17, 2009
By !*~*!Bethany!*~*! BRONZE, Montrose, Colorado
!*~*!Bethany!*~*! BRONZE, Montrose, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you just have to smile, pretend everythings okay, hold back the tears and just walk away.


Crying
Crying because of their mom
Crying because of their dad
two little girls crying
all because their mom and dad
did something bad

Crying
please make all this crying stop
my family is getting torn apart
just because their mom and dad
did something bad

Crying even more
the cars show up
and there is more crying
why cant all this crying just stop

Crying
the cars pull away slowly
then the crying stops
their mom, their dad are gone

No more crying, no more screaming
but their family
is torn apart
just because their
mom and dad
did something bad


The author's comments:
Its on an event that happened when i was little.

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on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:20 am
randomperson BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
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Treat others the way you want to be treated

I dont know why but my username should have beeen tj12321, but i will change it. :)

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:18 am
randomperson BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
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Treat others the way you want to be treated

Sorry, i dont know why, but my name on the sreen should be tj12321. Bye

on Oct. 22 2009 at 11:16 am
randomperson BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
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Treat others the way you want to be treated

I just want to tell you that this poem really touched me. I had the same thing happen to me, wait is this something that happened to you?

Even if it did not happen to you i want to kind of tell you about it. I was two. My parents were horrible. They would leave beer bottles out, give us rotten food, leave us in the middle of the road. So the police came took us away in one car, and my parents in another. Like in the poem there was crying and screaming, just because mom and dad

did something bad. I appreciate people who write stuff like this. I wrote a very short and not so good poem kind of like this one this, It is still being checked for appropiatness, but it should be out soon. Look for it, it is called taken. Great job!:)


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