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I Shall Never Love Again...

By , Medford, NY
love is a pitiful word,
in my life.
when you mention it,
my heart breaks,
don't know how long this
heart ach will take,
but love brings pain,
sometimes brings shame,
it splits a person in half.
obviously it could never
make you laugh,
only cry,
it's a lie,
that burns the insides.
of the heart,
I hate the word love,
because of it I am a beaten up
dove,
I shed tears of pitiful pain,
so Liam.
I have eternal bleeding,
Going on the inside of my
Broken down heart..
will this pain go on for eternity?
I shall never love again...





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blumarine said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 9:54 pm
love this poem, although very dark and sad. hope u make better experience with love some time ♥
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:13 pm
thanx
but i gave up on love
 
lunarbabe said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 7:52 pm
insainly amazing
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:13 pm
thanx
wrote that in 8th grade
=}
 
megm5099 said...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 10:43 am
i completly agree with you on this poem. ive been hurt plenty of times myself its hard to love again but in return we always go back to trying to be loved again your poem was epic by the way. :)
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:14 pm
thanx
and same here with the going back to it
but i never love someone 2 much
i know my limits now
 
himu131195 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 9:24 am
i loved your poem...its straight forward and that is why i liked it...it was intense and something everyone could relate to at some point in their life...
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:15 pm
thanx
i'm always straight with my poems
=)
 
bballchick_24 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 12:29 am
sounds like someone really hurt you.
or maybe it's just a peom.
either way...
i bet anybody could relate to this and thats the best part!
awesome peom!!
LOVE IT:)
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:16 pm
yes and no
they didn't mean 2
and thats the worst part
and thanx
 
WriiteO2iinspiire said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 2:07 pm
This was an amazinq Poem
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:17 pm
thanx =)
i'm glad you liked it
 
Aleece said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 4:21 pm
That's cool...i still like your poem
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:18 pm
yeah
its pretty deep.
glad that you still like it anyway
 
SagaLiSela This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 10:34 am
A strong piece that shows raw human emotion. I like this, though I was hoping for a shift in the poem, an even stonger conclusion. Overall, a very good piece.
I hope you choose to love again.
 
nooxygen replied...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 9:20 pm
thanx
never thought of it
in that way.
and yeah i wrote it in 8th grade
each time a rewrite my poems
to another notebook
on the computer
or on a random piece of paper i would redew some parts of my work
i'll keep that in mind when i rewrite this poem
and thanx again
 
lea_baby said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 4:12 pm
nice! ;-) but i actualy feel the total opposite about love..... but im glad u r all better now... stay strong gurlie-
 
nooxygen replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 2:23 pm
thanx
im actrually apathetic about love.
2 me now
its pointless.
but other times i want to love again
but i know that in the end my heart will soon be broken...
so thats y i stay out of love.
its easier that way
 
Castrol said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 10:35 am
This is really good. You show this strong emotion through simple words. I really like it. If this is all true then I hope someday things get better. I know how hard things like this can be, I'm in a similar situation right now. Great stuff.
 
nooxygen replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 2:32 pm
thanx
i really did not accept
theis many viewers, comments, and rates.
i thought this poem was rather plain.
but it was straight to the piont
 
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