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The stillness of the evening
Is undisturbed by wind
It's melancholy presence glooms the land
Foreshadoeing the oncoming Storm
Leaves dance away with the wind
Making trees bare and cold
The soft whispers foreshadow
The oncoming Storm
Skies darken to a sullen Gray
Then to eternal black
Small animals hide
While plants shrivel in fright
They know they won't survive
Mother Nature has finally started her revenge
Her harmless winds turn to gusts
Then big cold drops fall to the arid ground
Lightning cracks the sky
The oncoming Storm
Takes us by our hands
And lets us see from it's point of view
But shows awfull mercy
Wreaking Death upon the land
Instead of destroying us




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Luckie said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 3:55 pm:
This was a good poem! I loved it!
 
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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 4:18 pm:
youre the best. I love the ending too. that was nice. I love the poem too. that was really nice. I love the concept too. that was really nice. 5 starts. isnt that nice?
 
ninian replied...
May 14, 2010 at 5:09 pm :
why, thank you.... i didn't think it was that good but you've made me realize otherwise... hope you check out some of my other stuff:D
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 14, 2010 at 5:59 pm :
oui, oui captain.
 
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