Doubt

October 6, 2009
Take a leap
Take a chance
Jump off the looming cliffs
The jump kills
Kills my hope?
Kills my doubt?
I don't know
But I'm already falling





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kiwi12 said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 1:01 pm
oh dear. this describes some moments in my life for sure!
good job!
 
freedomfighter01 said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 12:58 pm
i totally agree! you put so much in to so little of words! awesome!
 
smalltownwrite210 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:20 pm
i love it! its simple and sweet but it still says so much.
 
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