I Need You

October 6, 2009
i cant live with out you and i just realized that.

your everything to me your not here and everything is wrong.

im not smiling or laughing because your not here.

your gone...
please please please come back i need you.

i look over and you are the only thing missing.

remember your all i need and your gone i at least need to look at you to put a smile back on my face.

and your the only one that can do that.

i need you right here with me.





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Ellie:) said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 2:59 pm
hey can you check out some of my new poems i just put on.?
Earth is falling
the truth
result
holocaust
[cheers]
i was thinking...
impossible to answer
does anyone really know?
we will pay
speak up
snippits
 
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 4:24 pm
Again, very powerful emotion, but i think it could be even better if you used that emotion to fuel your greatness even further. Use word choice carefully.
 
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