I Need You

October 6, 2009
By lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

i cant live with out you and i just realized that.

your everything to me your not here and everything is wrong.

im not smiling or laughing because your not here.

your gone...
please please please come back i need you.

i look over and you are the only thing missing.

remember your all i need and your gone i at least need to look at you to put a smile back on my face.

and your the only one that can do that.

i need you right here with me.

The author's comments:
i wrote this last year in art class when this boy that i like was gone from school and i though he wasnt gonna come back

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on Mar. 5 2010 at 2:59 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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hey can you check out some of my new poems i just put on.?

Earth is falling

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i was thinking...

impossible to answer

does anyone really know?

we will pay

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on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:24 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Again, very powerful emotion, but i think it could be even better if you used that emotion to fuel your greatness even further. Use word choice carefully.


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