Illusion of a killer's mind

October 4, 2009
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Fearing the slightest slip
Legs were calmly dragged on the floor
Voices, hushed in the silent lullaby
Eyes wandered where none could see

The doors were locked
The rain heavily poured
While its numb fragrance
Flew through small airways

Breathing was difficult
Deprived from the sun
The rays
And the heat

Minds were fogged by disturbed ideas
Uncontrollable actions took part of daily lives
A fool’s lifeless appearance
Became one’s miserable instinct
Others’ were his prey with a single glare

A slight misstep of a cold phrase
Spoken in mind twisting confusion
The heart dies and actions lie awake

The strong were killed
While the weak falter
When the mind conquers the body,
Distress accumulates
In the illusion of a killer’s mind.

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MadAsAHatter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:15 pm
That is really cool. I like it a lot. so much poetry is the same that its awesome to read something that's so different
TheSilenced W. said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:01 pm
Really makes you think in depth. I like it!
LostLuckie said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 12:17 am
that was really good! i loved it!!!
Cecile replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 12:41 pm
lol thanks
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