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A Moment Interrupted

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Hair lay softly over his eyes
eyes that were focused.
fingers plucking the strings
his heart calm
his body still
"Hey," she called.
The tranquility
was now broken.
his eyes now regained
that restless spark.




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ZAVERY said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 3:18 pm:
oh very nice poetry!
 
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TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:26 pm:
I wish you guys would rate and comment! thanks yall
 
tgir85 replied...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 5:41 pm :
i like it!!! ^^ kudos! keep it up but u may want to write longer ones??? just a thought check out my stuff
 
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