October 4, 2009
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dingy gray
concrete blocks
were his surroundings.
an ant,
small and black
trickled down a wall.
water dripped somewhere,
to his ears.
he greeted the ant,
his eyes empty, like the concrete embracing him.
"You are trapped too,
aren't you?"
The ant crawled on,
Into a small crack.
"No," he answered.
"tis just me."

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KiraKira said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 9:51 am
This is good, but it confuses me a bit. Where is he? What time period is this?
Veritytrue said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 11:22 pm
Nice job! I love the way you wrote this- really creative, strong imagery! Keep up the good work!
TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:27 pm
People! Plz read/comment/rate! gracias
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