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dingy gray
concrete blocks
were his surroundings.
an ant,
small and black
trickled down a wall.
water dripped somewhere,
echoing
to his ears.
"Hello,"
he greeted the ant,
monotonously,
his eyes empty, like the concrete embracing him.
"You are trapped too,
aren't you?"
The ant crawled on,
Into a small crack.
"No," he answered.
"tis just me."



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KiraKira said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 9:51 am
This is good, but it confuses me a bit. Where is he? What time period is this?
 
Veritytrue said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 11:22 pm
Nice job! I love the way you wrote this- really creative, strong imagery! Keep up the good work!
 
TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:27 pm
People! Plz read/comment/rate! gracias
 
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