It was you

October 4, 2009
By AshliCallison PLATINUM, Cary, North Carolina
AshliCallison PLATINUM, Cary, North Carolina
29 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
love knows not its own depth till the hour of seperation by kahlil gibran

Running from the truth only to live the lie
All the feelings I had for you, I’d only deny
Even when he wasn’t hurting me, I could only think of you
You’ll never know how much I wanted to tell you I loved you too

Finally he hurt me far beyond repair
I was surprised to find I didn’t even care
I sat there drowning in the depths of your eyes
No longer would I fall for his stupid lies

I don’t know why I held on for so long
I loved you even though I knew it was wrong
I should have been with you from the start
It was you, not him that had stolen my heart

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tgir85 GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 5:51 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."


on Oct. 12 2009 at 8:07 am
Jessica... BRONZE, Hephzibah, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it. Because nobody else will. Like when someone comes into your life and half of you says you're nowhere near ready, but the other half says: make him yours forever.

aw, i liked this poem. great writing! :)


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