When I come To

October 3, 2009
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Of all the ones I’ve come to know
You’re the one I hate the most while your blast holds a steady flow
My grip is gnawed down to the bone
It takes my mind a second to blow
But it takes my guns a time to load
And although the path unfolds
It’s covered by dust and smoke
So should I ever make a hit
I guess I will never know
Could I be on your hit list?
I really prefer not to know
Yet sure enough I do suppose
Itsnice to see some action unfold
Unless you’re starring in the show
And taking on the leading roll
But that of course I’ll never know
Because you have the lightest toes
And hide in the darkest abode
And watch me work from your window
As if I’m too dumb to know
So I went into backup mode
And I bore arms a hundred fold
See me stationed at my post
Constantly marching to and fro
Hoping that after something blows
It might very well explode
And precisely let me know
When you’re ready to go
And surely as you would suppose
I have never left my post
Because I don’t know
where this unfolds
So I remain here on my own
Waiting for my guns to load.


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. said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 10:56 am
Well u should go work that out somewhere.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 10:59 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

That's Nice! Me, and star girl and raven are seriously offended!

. said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 10:33 pm
Oh...that one.she reminds me of green trash cans and purple bunnies and stickers ........and gum.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 4:19 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

True, true, but you don't comment on Liz's (savetheplanet)'s work, she doesn't even know you. Besides, I want to make it official. :)

on Sep. 24 2011 at 2:35 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

Uh, dont I already do that? Thats like asking me if I wanna start living on land and breathing air. Thnx for the invite but im already a mammal.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:30 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Staplers=stalkers Weird typo

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:28 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I am inviting you to the fellow staplers circle. It's this thing where me, star-girl, raven and Liz(a new teen inker) comment on each other's work. You in?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:25 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

That sucks, it's one of my favorites. It has a wit and humor to it. :)

on Sep. 23 2011 at 7:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I really did laugh out loud. I feel like not enough people like this one. Its not about real buns by the way. Came off thetop of my head. Merci captain

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 9:49 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I enjoyed reading this poem. A lot. 

Reminds me of everything gangsta and gangster. :) 


on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:43 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, mokey....I'll have a hard time literalizing the mokey, it's better when I'm literalizing the moNkey.

on Aug. 18 2010 at 5:20 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i know right? thats probably why we keep coming so close. i love your analyzing skills and the way you literalize everything. i can appreciate you on the mokey.

on Aug. 17 2010 at 10:22 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Well, if "they" who are plotting against our devious Teen Ink posts have forgotten about the monkey, then they are not very good plotters, then, are they?

on Aug. 17 2010 at 1:14 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

whoever leveled us and is watching this in silence. i meant they as in "the man" but plural. its an entity thats been plotting against us captain.

on Aug. 17 2010 at 11:37 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Well, I would agree with you there, but that depends on who "they" is.

on Aug. 16 2010 at 8:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i dont think you're bad at literalizing. youre too good at literalizing. just like now,...there goes my eye. i think they forgot about the monkey.

on Aug. 16 2010 at 11:37 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I know a cricket doesn't go cricket, but I said cricket because that's how I say "chirp chirp" and also because when crickets chirp, the sound they make has two sylables, and so "chirp chirp" doesn't help me, now, does it?  And you think I was bad at literalizing...

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

the cricket doesnt go cricket cricket just as the bird didnt go bird bird. they all go chirp chirp. get on me.

on Aug. 14 2010 at 2:33 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

No, I mean cricket.  Birds go chirp.  If I wanted chirp, Id've said it.

on Aug. 12 2010 at 6:02 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

uh... you mean chirp, chirp? youre hilarious captain.


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