Where'd You Go?

i woke to find your loving face,
smiling over me,
filled with grace.

but just as soon as i said hello,
you went away,
to where i dont know.

i sat straight up,
and looked around,
but everywhere i looked,
there was no one to be found.

i took out your picture,
and closed my eyes,
there you were again,
quiet and suprised.

i asked you why you werent still here,
you said dont worry,
"I'm spending some time with Jesus this year."





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nooxygen said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 2:46 pm
awsome =]
good job
 
Quiera_ser_adorado<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 9:06 pm
thankss.. i love geting feed back
 
White_Shadow said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 2:08 pm
lovely. really :)
 
Quiera_ser_adorado<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 9:14 am
thanksss so muchhh
 
AnnonymousFate replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 5:39 pm
I like this a lot. It almost made me cry. Please check out some of my work too :)
 
Quiera_ser_adorado<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 9:07 pm
oki doki, i will when i get back in school :)
 
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