Ice Statue

October 2, 2009
By ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
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Stars twinkle all around me
Black velvet envelopes the night
A soft winter breeze sweeps the land
All animals hibernate and escape the cold winter
While I stay out here, freezing
I'm all alone
Nobody walks in this barren wasteland
Not even a small white rabbit
The breeze freezes me to my spot
The tree provides no shelter
And the leaves provide no warmth
My body's warmth deserts me
While shivers replace it
Soon enough Ice wraps my whole body
My blood freezes and stops flowing
Now I can't escape
But I smile as I know
I've become an Ice Statue


The author's comments:
my friend needed something to draw so i quickly made this poem for her. i hope you all like it:)

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on May. 14 2010 at 6:00 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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if you got any thing i havent looked at i'll comment on those suckers(items) for you.

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on May. 14 2010 at 5:17 pm
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
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glad i could solve your wonder:D

on May. 10 2010 at 4:23 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

5 stars.youre the man(or woman). you have a marvelous way of sharing with us the experience of freezing to death. I no longer wonder................

on Oct. 17 2009 at 3:34 am
evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
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I like the description in this a lot. You convey emotion very well, although the ending could have been more powerful.

on Oct. 13 2009 at 7:22 pm
LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
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"What doesn't kill me only, will make me stronger in my head..." Papa Roach, Kick In The Teeth

thanks for suggesting to me to check out some of your work! it was really cool! i loved it!


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