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Stars twinkle all around me
Black velvet envelopes the night
A soft winter breeze sweeps the land
All animals hibernate and escape the cold winter
While I stay out here, freezing
I'm all alone
Nobody walks in this barren wasteland
Not even a small white rabbit
The breeze freezes me to my spot
The tree provides no shelter
And the leaves provide no warmth
My body's warmth deserts me
While shivers replace it
Soon enough Ice wraps my whole body
My blood freezes and stops flowing
Now I can't escape
But I smile as I know
I've become an Ice Statue



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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2010 at 4:23 pm
5 stars.youre the man(or woman). you have a marvelous way of sharing with us the experience of freezing to death. I no longer wonder................
 
ninian replied...
May 14, 2010 at 5:17 pm
glad i could solve your wonder:D
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 14, 2010 at 6:00 pm
if you got any thing i havent looked at i'll comment on those suckers(items) for you.
 
evil_naiad said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 3:34 am
I like the description in this a lot. You convey emotion very well, although the ending could have been more powerful.
 
LostLuckie said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 7:22 pm
thanks for suggesting to me to check out some of your work! it was really cool! i loved it!
 
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