yesterday, today, tomorrow

September 28, 2009
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i love you

i will say the same thing
over and over again
yesterday, today, tomorrow.

my mouth will never betray
I know that you are the one





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elfiewrites said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:16 pm
Awwwh. What a sweet poem! I absolutely love your writing style! Please, if you get the chance, may you give me some feedback on either my article "Is There Reason?" or "Try to Remember." Much appreciated. Keep on writing!
 
Johaa said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 5:50 pm

I loved this poem and i agree with citylightsgirl93, so simple yet so clear! 

And thanks for being the very first person (who isn't my mom) who commented about my work! :D

 
Rosalie replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 6:58 am

thanks for the comment!

ur welcome:)

 
citylightsgirl93 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 2:04 pm
i love this... so simple yet so clear! keep up the fantastic work!
 
rhodasown said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 10:26 pm
Hi Rosalie, this is rhodasown of "Beloved Memories". I really like your work especially this piece. The simplicity really lets this poem have impact. It is a great contrast between the simplicity of the verse and the great complexity of Love.
 
Rosalie replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 5:24 am
thank you so much for the comment!
i love your work!
 
rhodasown replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 8:25 pm
Thank you, Rosalie.
 
elizabethlaura said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 2:18 pm
this is so pretty and fresh :)
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 12:22 pm
So sweet n pure
 
Rosalie replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 6:42 am
thanks for the comment!
 
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