yesterday, today, tomorrow

September 28, 2009
By Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.


i love you

i will say the same thing
over and over again
yesterday, today, tomorrow.

my mouth will never betray
I know that you are the one



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on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:16 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

Awwwh. What a sweet poem! I absolutely love your writing style! Please, if you get the chance, may you give me some feedback on either my article "Is There Reason?" or "Try to Remember." Much appreciated. Keep on writing!

on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:58 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

thanks for the comment!

ur welcome:)


on Mar. 30 2010 at 5:50 pm
JustWriting BRONZE, Sao Paulo, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

I loved this poem and i agree with citylightsgirl93, so simple yet so clear! 

And thanks for being the very first person (who isn't my mom) who commented about my work! :D


on Mar. 29 2010 at 2:04 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

i love this... so simple yet so clear! keep up the fantastic work!

rhodasown said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 8:25 pm
rhodasown, Penngrove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that imagination is stronger than knowledge--myth is more potent than history--dreams are more powerful than facts--hope always triumphs over experience--laughter is the cure for grief--love is stronger than death."
~Robert Fulgham

Thank you, Rosalie.

on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:24 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

thank you so much for the comment!

i love your work!

rhodasown said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 10:26 pm
rhodasown, Penngrove, California
0 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe that imagination is stronger than knowledge--myth is more potent than history--dreams are more powerful than facts--hope always triumphs over experience--laughter is the cure for grief--love is stronger than death."
~Robert Fulgham

Hi Rosalie, this is rhodasown of "Beloved Memories". I really like your work especially this piece. The simplicity really lets this poem have impact. It is a great contrast between the simplicity of the verse and the great complexity of Love.

on Jan. 31 2010 at 2:18 pm
justsmile164 BRONZE, New York, New York
4 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Talent is nothing without character."

this is so pretty and fresh :)

on Jan. 28 2010 at 6:42 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

thanks for the comment!

on Jan. 27 2010 at 12:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

So sweet n pure


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