I the True Hero

September 27, 2009
By supterstar1995 BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
supterstar1995 BRONZE, Wilmington, Delaware
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When I went into the war I thought I lost my mind
I heard a bomb go off am I still alive?
I drifted away and started to dream
Stood up tall and knew I had to fight in this war for my country…
Soldiers screaming
Smoke in the air
1 2 3 is this the end for me?
Something is wrong. My chest is bleeding was it the missal or my life retreating?
Life is a mystery and so is war.
You’ll never know what to expect
Till you go off and soar
And now I pay the price
Of being a hero and trying to be nice…..

The author's comments:
Since a war is goign on, i thought that i should iclude that this hero is risking his life for our country maybe coming out dead.

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rengeki SILVER said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:15 pm
rengeki SILVER, Carrollton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
My past haunts my mind,
My present haunts my body,
And my future lingers in my grave,

i really like it i wrote something similiar maybe you should read it


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