Evil Fly This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

September 25, 2009
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I HATE that fly,
Buzzing around,
Dancing through the air that surrounds the
Cantaloupe dish,
Heedless completely of
My first swat,
My second,
My third.

Why does it have to exist
In this world?

That fly
Is
More
Aggravating
Than

My sister.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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bmmsjc said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 10:18 am
its a funny poem like more anoying than my sister
 
Sophie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 6:20 pm
Yep, I TOTALLY agree!!!
 
bmmsac said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:34 am
i love flies but then when they start buzzing they are really dead
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:33 am
Lol nice comparison!
Omg I hate those things! lol
Its hilarious, very good,
keep it up!=]
 
Kay4theRoses said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:29 am
=)
lighthearted.
check out my stuff and tell me what you think.
 
enchanted4yu said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 6:27 pm
hehe this is funny. Similar to Shell Silverstein poems which i love! Please check out some of my work i would really appreciate it
 
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