Evil Fly MAG

September 25, 2009
By Sophie SILVER, Hillsborough, North Carolina
Sophie SILVER, Hillsborough, North Carolina
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I HATE that fly,
Buzzing around,
Dancing through the air that surrounds the
Cantaloupe dish,
Heedless completely of
My first swat,
My second,
My third.

Why does it have to exist
In this world?

That fly
Is
More
Aggravating
Than

My sister.



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Sophie SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 6:20 pm
Sophie SILVER, Hillsborough, North Carolina
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Yep, I TOTALLY agree!!!

bmmsjc said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:18 am
its a funny poem like more anoying than my sister

bmmsac said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:34 am
i love flies but then when they start buzzing they are really dead

on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:33 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Lol nice comparison!

Omg I hate those things! lol

Its hilarious, very good,

keep it up!=]

Kay4theRoses said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:29 am
Kay4theRoses, O&#39brien, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"all's fair in love and war." And "Beware of a fat man whose belly doesn't jiggle when he laughs."-A Chinese philosopher. =)

=)

lighthearted.

check out my stuff and tell me what you think.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:27 pm
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

hehe this is funny. Similar to Shell Silverstein poems which i love! Please check out some of my work i would really appreciate it


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