FALL!

September 24, 2009
By Rachel Jones BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
Rachel Jones BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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Leaves
Red, orange, yellow
Crunching at my feet
Falling from the trees
As I walk along the road
Leaves are everywhere
The season I love
Fall



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cookie said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 11:43 am
Very Good very few lines but described

Fall at its best. Hope Rachel J keeps up

the good work

Auntie said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 7:08 pm
Sweet & gentle, just like the leaves falling

motaki said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 6:51 pm
Flows very well...good grasp of rhyme for a young person. I give it maximan stars.

forward14 said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 7:19 pm
I love this poem. It is to the point. Really describes the season!!!!


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