September 24, 2009
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Red, orange, yellow
Crunching at my feet
Falling from the trees
As I walk along the road
Leaves are everywhere
The season I love

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cookie said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 11:43 am
Very Good very few lines but described
Fall at its best. Hope Rachel J keeps up
the good work
Auntie said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 7:08 pm
Sweet & gentle, just like the leaves falling
motaki said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 6:51 pm
Flows very well...good grasp of rhyme for a young person. I give it maximan stars.
forward14 said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 7:19 pm
I love this poem. It is to the point. Really describes the season!!!!
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