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She told me not to give her secret away
I do not know if I can keep the promise I made with her
If I break the promise she will feel the emotion of betray
Our friendship would go from being really great to a big blur

I do not know if I can keep the promise I made with her
Our connection would go from bright blue to dark dull gray
Our friendship would go from being great to a blur
My heart would sink because she wouldn’t talk to me day after day

Our connection would go from bright blue to dark dull gray
I would feel upset looking at the friends that we once were
My heart would sink because she wouldn’t talk to me day after day
Now we are just two strangers, a woman and a sir

I would feel upset looking at the friends that we once were
If I break the promise she will feel the emotion of betray
I do not want to be strangers, like a customer and an entrepreneur
Now we are just two strangers, a woman and a sir



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kayleighbean13 said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 8:30 am
I really liked this poem because a lot of people, mostly girls feel this way when a friend tells them something secret. I could really connect to this in several ways.
 
shamira replied...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 7:07 pm
I like this peom because it is real thing in the magical world where to great friends tell each one secrets and one of them break the promise by not keeping and that's when their friendship comes to an end.
 
Meghan said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 9:05 pm
Wondeful poem. Love the arrangement.
 
ashcan1993 said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 7:22 pm
This is great!!!!
 
dylonmichael said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 12:48 pm
omg this is good real good
 
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