Blood stained Bliss

September 19, 2009
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The blood stained
walls surround me
as well as the pool
of her blood
also mixed with mine
myvision is blurred
the tears fell from
my face and only
added to the pool
of sorrows at my feet
why had this happened
I had lovered her
hadn't I?
yes, i had
I would have
given my life for her
and tonight would be
no different
I take the knife
to my heart
and as my hot
confessions pour out
adding to the sorrows
I feel none
but bliss
as i came to her
In death
In a Blood stained bliss

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SaintJamesHallow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 12:56 am
Excellent post, I really like the gruesomeness of it all and the confusion in the voice
Joyful_angel said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 10:02 pm
wow, that was deep, but really good!!!
Titan12339 replied...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 7:43 pm
thank you thats what i was going for =P
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 10:40 am
hehe, no problem, u did really good, keep writtiing!!!! i just got another poem online, chek it out if u can, and let me kno
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