Who Am I

September 17, 2009
By choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken


Am I the girl in the corner
Am I the girl everybody loves
Am I the girl everybody hates
Am I the girl that is bubbly

Am I the overachiever
Am I the prep
Am I the goth
Am I the nerd
Am I the misundersrood
Am I the jock

Do I sit at home
Do I hang out with friends
Do I chill with my boyfriend
Do I have people do stuff for me
Do I sit in the back of class and read

I am the girl who hangs out with friends
Iam the girl reading in the back of class
I am the prep
I am the girl in the corner
I am the girl writing this poem
I am bubbly


I am ME


The author's comments:
This is about just being different. How we can be multiple things and not get judged. I wrote this because it expresses who I am

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on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:38 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thank you so much for your comments. i appreciate them

Oracion SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:40 am
Oracion SILVER, Muskogee, Oklahoma
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fiction's not much different from Reality, sometimes people just forget to look for the magic in their own lives

I really like the subject of the poem. It's well written. I especially like your use of anaphora (lol, I learned that word in my Language and Composition class). But on topic, this is really good.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:21 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

Thank you everybody for your comments.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 9:59 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

I like this poem a lot. It's very pretty, and I like how it's kind of anti-label.

savina GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 4:45 am
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping".- my ap enviromental science teacher

sorry about the spelling in the beginning, my brother was messing with me.

savina GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 4:43 am
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping".- my ap enviromental science teacher

I likemthis poem alot...my favorite part is at the end when you say 'I am'

on Sep. 28 2009 at 2:58 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I really like this poem. It says a lot about you, how you can be different people and have different personalities.

on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:37 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

srry i wrote in all caps i was having an off day and keep up the good work

on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:35 am
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
This is such an amazing poem. Really says much about you. Your personality and feelings. Great Job. God Bless

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:43 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thnx. the words just came to me

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:42 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

OMG I LOVE IT IM A GUY I AM NOT A PREP I AM THE MISSUNDERSTOOD BUT I READ IN THE BACK OF THE CLASS I AM BUBLY I HANG IWHT MY FIRENDS


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