I Don't Want to be Like This

September 17, 2009
By EmmyEcstasy BRONZE, Hillsboro, Wisconsin
EmmyEcstasy BRONZE, Hillsboro, Wisconsin
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I don’t want to be like this
But I miss your touch
And I miss your kiss
Tell me what to do
Baby I’m so confused
I’m so in love with you
I’ve been lying around
Not sure what to think
Give me a thought give me a sound
Nothings been quite right
I’m not sure where it went wrong
Can we fix this tonight?
You make the stress melt away
I need you in my life
I don’t want to miss a day
So tell me why do you always want to leave?
Did I do wrong or am I to much?
Maybe I’m too naïve
You tell me to believe in us
And I’m trying so hard
But honey there’s so much to discuss

The author's comments:
I'm not sure.I just typed out my feelings like usual

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on Sep. 28 2009 at 3:21 pm
EmmyEcstasy BRONZE, Hillsboro, Wisconsin
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Yep. The first line is what inspired me. Its from a song called The Diary by Hollywood Undead. Good song.

Ampersand GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 3:15 pm
Ampersand GOLD, Mount Desert, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"RedVines! What the hell can't they do?"

I loved that. It sounded familiar to me though. Like maybe a song?....

I dunno. Don't listen to me...

Anyway, that was cool and you SHOULD write more.

on Sep. 27 2009 at 6:14 pm
EmmyEcstasy BRONZE, Hillsboro, Wisconsin
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Thanks(:

I seem to only be able to write when something happens though lol

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:16 pm
xxxitsgreattobelovedxxx BRONZE, Plymouth, Massachusetts
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i love your poem!you should totally wriite more! ;)


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