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Why Him

Falling down
In the darkness before you
Cant think
Cuz, my heart is ripped
But already have been sanked

My tears are cold falling down my face
Because he hurt me by fading away
They say
Prepare for the worst it will never return

They was right
Because I felt broken and burned




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Amanda24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:12 am:
great writing !!!!
 
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Ghada Q. said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 7:44 am:
awesome.... i'd love fr u to comment on the one i wrote.. TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/133277/Insane-Anyway-poem/
 
Express123 replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 3:04 pm :
thank you very much
 
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xxxitsgreattobelovedxxx said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 10:17 pm:
wow........thats realy good.write more
 
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